Wednesday, 21 November 2018

A Forsaken Garden

I think I must now blog the whole poem.

A Forsaken Garden
In a coign of the cliff between lowland and highland, 
       At the sea-down's edge between windward and lee, 
Walled round with rocks as an inland island, 
       The ghost of a garden fronts the sea. 
A girdle of brushwood and thorn encloses 
       The steep square slope of the blossomless bed 
Where the weeds that grew green from the graves of its roses 
               Now lie dead. 

The fields fall southward, abrupt and broken, 
       To the low last edge of the long lone land. 
If a step should sound or a word be spoken, 
       Would a ghost not rise at the strange guest's hand? 
So long have the grey bare walks lain guestless, 
       Through branches and briars if a man make way, 
He shall find no life but the sea-wind's, restless 
               Night and day. 

The dense hard passage is blind and stifled 
       That crawls by a track none turn to climb 
To the strait waste place that the years have rifled 
       Of all but the thorns that are touched not of time. 
The thorns he spares when the rose is taken; 
       The rocks are left when he wastes the plain. 
The wind that wanders, the weeds wind-shaken, 
               These remain. 

Not a flower to be pressed of the foot that falls not; 
       As the heart of a dead man the seed-plots are dry; 
From the thicket of thorns whence the nightingale calls not, 
       Could she call, there were never a rose to reply. 
Over the meadows that blossom and wither 
       Rings but the note of a sea-bird's song; 
Only the sun and the rain come hither 
               All year long. 

The sun burns sere and the rain dishevels 
       One gaunt bleak blossom of scentless breath. 
Only the wind here hovers and revels 
       In a round where life seems barren as death. 
Here there was laughing of old, there was weeping, 
       Haply, of lovers none ever will know, 
Whose eyes went seaward a hundred sleeping 
               Years ago. 

Heart handfast in heart as they stood, "Look thither," 
       Did he whisper? "look forth from the flowers to the sea; 
For the foam-flowers endure when the rose-blossoms wither, 
       And men that love lightly may die—but we?" 
And the same wind sang and the same waves whitened, 
       And or ever the garden's last petals were shed, 
In the lips that had whispered, the eyes that had lightened, 
               Love was dead. 

Or they loved their life through, and then went whither? 
       And were one to the end—but what end who knows? 
Love deep as the sea as a rose must wither, 
       As the rose-red seaweed that mocks the rose. 
Shall the dead take thought for the dead to love them? 
       What love was ever as deep as a grave? 
They are loveless now as the grass above them 
               Or the wave. 

All are at one now, roses and lovers, 
       Not known of the cliffs and the fields and the sea. 
Not a breath of the time that has been hovers 
       In the air now soft with a summer to be. 
Not a breath shall there sweeten the seasons hereafter 
       Of the flowers or the lovers that laugh now or weep, 
When as they that are free now of weeping and laughter 
               We shall sleep. 

Here death may deal not again for ever; 
       Here change may come not till all change end. 
From the graves they have made they shall rise up never, 
       Who have left nought living to ravage and rend. 
Earth, stones, and thorns of the wild ground growing, 
       While the sun and the rain live, these shall be; 
Till a last wind's breath upon all these blowing 
               Roll the sea. 

Till the slow sea rise and the sheer cliff crumble, 
       Till terrace and meadow the deep gulfs drink, 
Till the strength of the waves of the high tides humble 
       The fields that lessen, the rocks that shrink, 
Here now in his triumph where all things falter, 
       Stretched out on the spoils that his own hand spread, 
As a god self-slain on his own strange altar, 
               Death lies dead. 


 As I said in a previous blog, this makes me think of my young parents, in the 1940s, newly engaged, so young, so much in love, visiting my granny's house on the Cornish coast.  That was in the immediate post-war - bomb sites everywhere, land mines washing up on the beach, food rationing, my father a "displaced person" - and Cornwall itself was a forsaken kind of place then - wild and remote.   At least that is how I knew it in the Fifties.  The beaches were empty then.    Hard to imagine that now.  But its beauty and its sadness stays in my mind and is evoked by this poem.

I don't know where the garden was.   And don't know what Swinburne's religious beliefs were. But in the poem he seems to accept the Biblical view that the dead are "conscious of nothing at all"- and that also there will come a time when death will be no more.

Did he know of this promise in Revelation?
"With that I heard a loud voice from the throne say: “Look! The tent of God is with mankind, and he will reside with them, and they will be his people. And God himself will be with them. And he will wipe out every tear from their eyes, and death will be no more, neither will mourning nor outcry nor pain be anymore. The former things have passed away.”" - Revelation 21:3,4

Death will be no more.  The dead will be woken from their dreamless sleep of death into an earth more lovely than they imagined it could be. And I hope to see my parents then, and my granny, and my dear Aunt Jo.


This morning I shopped briefly - and visited Maggie in the afternoon. There is not a lot of her left now. But she still loves a visitor - any visitor. She doesn't know me from Adam now, though in the early days she was there we could look at the Watchtower study together. She no longer writes her diary, which is a sad landmark.    And to my amazement I met someone I knew in the lounge - an elderly lady at whose doorstep I have been calling for many years.  I couldn't quite make out why she was there, though she is perfectly compos mentis and we had a good talk.  She is hoping to be back in her home next week, so I will look out for her both there and in the nursing home the next time I visit Maggie.

I hope her stay can be a temporary one.  But I am worried it won't.  Anyway, she seemed very pleased to see me, and I got a kiss!

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